today on Friday 14 of June 2019 we had winter sports and i did hockey.
the thing that went well most was our goals well we only got one but it is better than none
i found hard was when i got a hockey stick into the knee and when the vibrations from the ball
it when right up to mah hand😭 it hurt but i am find now
it when right up to mah hand😭 it hurt but i am find now
i am looking forward to winning next week and my mum is going to watch yay
i need to work on my hitting because i miss it sometimes 
Hello,I like how you told us how you got hit in the knee with a hockey stick and how you felt.Maybe try work on your punctuation and make the I a capital.
ReplyDeleteHi Sophia I didn't know that you liked hockey and played it for winter sport.
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Hi Sophia its Francheska here
DeleteI didn’t know that you did hockey for winter sports, i did that as well!
This reminded of when you were back at school.
Maybe next time you could double check your post because the picture on it was not letting me see it.
Do you know what place you came in hockey?
hi sophia,i did not know that you liked hockey!This is a great blog post about hockey,Maybe next time you could but more full stops in.we miss a hole heap at marshlands.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work,Matilda
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Sophia it’s Sophie from Marshland School I play hockey as well,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you included a picture of what you were talking about.
This reminded me of how i won my hockey in the weekend.
Next time, you could check your punctuation.
Where did you go to play?
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Sophie.